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Open Poetry #17

Keep writing about love

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-12-28 06:56 PM

If you would be right here
next to me
would we talk
or would we stare at each
other in awe?
Would we reveal secrets
unknown?
If we saw
eye to eye would we
lose hope?
What would our masks reveal
when off?
Would we lose interest and walk
Or would we keep our friendship
and keep writing about love?

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2001-12-28 07:02 PM

The uncertainty of seeing someone you love
and have never seen...This could happen
easily on the internet...Much can be felt
across the miles of wires...

Nice poem Walker...

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-12-28 07:02 PM

I hope no matter what, you are able to keep the friendship....sometimes, that matters more, and the love, deeper.....

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-12-28 07:04 PM

(sigh) Such touching questions of love, sweet friend, always listen to your loving heart and you will find the most happiest hopes and love for your heart! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I missed your words of true love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2001-12-28 07:11 PM

Interesting poem...it's scary to think that it might not remain love....(this goes into my library.)

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