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Morning Thoughts |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“MORNING THOUGHTS” by Bill Charles ~~~~ In my mind are many different thoughts, and one of them was to write a poem this morning… But I didn’t know what to write about, until my heart spoke saying, “make it becoming”… I looked up this word in the dictionary, and it says the following, ‘tending to have an attractive effect’… The first thought that came to my mind, were words about you, and the ways you protect… When I’m sad inside, you make me smile, you speak to me, and listen to my words… The warmth of your touch charms me, it all keeps me, going forwards… So I just wanted you to know how I feel, with these few words, which I’ve written… And to say from my heart, how I love you, for you have captured all of, my affection… ~~~~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This is truly beautiful writing Bill. Such expression of feeling is so truly heartfelt. wonderful... On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now this is sweet and cozy...and I am beginning to think it's spring! Someone is lucky to inspire such tenderness! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Bill, what a comely poem, well becoming to your grace and style. (And no I'm not going to add you'll see her in the mourning when she'll be coming around the mountain.) *wink* Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Bill, this is sooooooo beautiful, sometimes the most beautiful honest words of poetry come from simple words of terms of endearment! (big hugggssssss) May her love always fill your heart, sweet friend, as we all love you so so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* very lucky lady to have touched and inspired your heart. Very well said. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you've done well here my friend. . . and indeed, captured us with your words. . . excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Bill....and oh so romantic! Hugs, Nancy. *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is utterly utterly fabulous. truly becoming. How can you write so well all the time? I wish I could. DO I wish I'd written this? What's the point of wishing for the moon, I might just as well wish to become the Queen of England, it's not going to happen so I'll stop whishing. Instead I'll enjoy the wonder of you.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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