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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-28 12:40 PM


I thought of you this morning.
I could not help but to do that.
Why?  Because of who you are.
Who you are to me in my life.

Memories...some great ones...
I shall always have them.
I won’t let them diminish or fade.
They are part of me, of you...

Without you, I feel alone.
With you...I have all I need.
Stay with me in our world.
Love me as I do so love you.

Let your dreams be of us
For I do wish them be true.
And as I rest beside you...
Let my dreams be of you...

You know when I am sad.
My silence speaks ever loud.
My eyes, the sparkle dimming
show the feelings I have.

I have loved you since that moment.
The first time I saw, heard, smelled you.
I want to always have that...
An eternity of life is all I ask.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-28 12:43 PM


TRY?

oh, this is so romantic....

please, keep trying and I'll keep sighing

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2 posted 2001-12-28 12:45 PM


Barry, whatever you're doing keep it up!  This is fabulous!

I am/Kathleen/

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3 posted 2001-12-28 12:47 PM


Writing in the morning usually works for me too..enjoyed Magnus..lovely thoughts..

                ~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

                                            Pablo Picasso


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4 posted 2001-12-28 12:49 PM


Magnus,
An eternity of love, Why not. Enjoyed.

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5 posted 2001-12-28 01:43 PM


Barry,

     You did very well.. this is soooo romantic I enjoyed.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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6 posted 2001-12-28 04:40 PM


Keep those romantic hits coming!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

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7 posted 2001-12-28 04:50 PM


....sigh....

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Ariana
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8 posted 2001-12-28 04:58 PM


Whatever you do, please keep writing.  Your feelings and emotions are written in each word.  This piece is really very good.  It is a keeper.
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9 posted 2001-12-28 05:41 PM


Sue...I am...I really am...It is just very
hard right now...Thanx..

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10 posted 2001-12-28 05:42 PM


Kay...it is taking all of my inner strength..
but I am writing...Thank you very much.

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11 posted 2001-12-28 05:43 PM


Thank You Victoria...she deserves these
thoughts...

Magnus
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12 posted 2001-12-28 05:44 PM


Seymour,  always enjoy your comment...Thank
You..

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13 posted 2001-12-28 05:45 PM


Tara...you are an ever faithful reader of
my words...I am grateful for that..Thanx..

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14 posted 2001-12-28 05:46 PM


Domzi...I am trying very hard to do just
that...thank you...

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15 posted 2001-12-28 05:47 PM


Nancy...again and again...you always are
there to make a kind remark or gesture..
Thank You...They mean a lot right now..

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16 posted 2001-12-28 05:48 PM


Ariana...thats just how I am...the way I
write..Happy that you enjoyed this poem..

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17 posted 2001-12-28 06:05 PM




(smiles) Yes, with your loving heart, always listen to it and try and you are bound to smile with eternal love ever after! (big hugggsssss) Your talent always amazes me, sweet friend, you are a true inspiration to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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18 posted 2001-12-28 06:08 PM


Noah...IF God gives an award for the warmth
of poetic comments...you most assuredly
will win...Thank You...

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19 posted 2001-12-29 12:05 PM


*sigh* this touches the heart. If this is just trying then I want more of it. Absolutely stunning, Barry.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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