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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-12-28 10:16 AM


I listen as you breath
in the dark
reflect on all
we have become.
Holding you
while you sleep
felt is
the beating
of your heart.
Through the darkness
sensing
this closeness shared.
Two hearts,
sharing,
this once in a lifetime
kind of love.

~Your Dreams Are Mine
My Dreams Are Yours.~

We are
two souls
united in love.
My freedom
is found
lost in pools of sapphire
while wading
through your essence.
My spirit fills
with a peace.
In serenity
I drift off
slumbering
held in love
by the keeper
of my heart.


On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)



[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-28-2001 11:08 AM).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-28 10:18 AM


Donna, such love in this!  Such hope and love!

I am/Kathleen/

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-12-28 10:20 AM


Rose, I think there is always hope in love.  I guess I will be a hopeless romantic all of my life..*s*  Thanks.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

SEA
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3 posted 2001-12-28 10:44 AM


I just love the way this feels so soft and gentle, and so so in love beautiful!
Gentle Spirit
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4 posted 2001-12-28 10:48 AM


Sea,  I thank you for those kind words.  Love can be a wonderful thing.  Sometimes love just hurts like He-- but other times...aint it grande??!!  Thanks hon.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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5 posted 2001-12-28 10:57 AM


Gentle Spirit,
A lovely gentle write, enjoyed

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2001-12-28 10:59 AM


Sey, I am so glad that you enjoyed.  I write them like I feel them.  Thank you!

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-12-28 11:07 AM


lost in pools of sapphire
while wading
through your essence.
My spirit fills
with a peace.
In serenity
I drift off
====================


well it doesnt get much better than this.
beautiful, soft spoken sentiments GS...how lucky you are to touch this kind of content.
well done poetess Donna.
jm

When your own emptiness is all thats getting through,
there comes a point when youre not sure why youre still talking...I passed that point long ago.

Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2001-12-28 11:41 AM


It truly doesn't get better than that Janet.  I consider myself to be very lucky, blessed.  Thanks JM, your words so appreciated.  Hugs to you lil butterfly.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Victoria
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9 posted 2001-12-28 12:13 PM


Wonderful when you find that *keeper of your heart*..im happy for you Donna..hugs

             ~Victoria~

Enchantress
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10 posted 2001-12-28 01:16 PM


Donna, this is so pretty and gentle....
Love it, I do!  
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Gentle Spirit
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11 posted 2001-12-28 02:10 PM


Victoria, I thank you for that.  I am indeed glad that I found this *keeper*  Hugs

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2001-12-28 02:11 PM


Nancy, thank you!  I am so glad that you enjoyed my soft thoughts...

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

ecrivan
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13 posted 2001-12-28 03:04 PM


what what a gentle write in contrast to my
end of life theme for the day May God grant peace and happiness for many many years
to come, happy holidays again


EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...
14 posted 2001-12-29 10:29 PM


After reading this all I can do smile take care!
Ivy Rose
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15 posted 2001-12-30 12:00 PM


Gentle Spirit...Your name so well describes this gentle, poem of intimacy and love. ENJOYED THIS!!!  ***Ivy Rose
texasrose
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16 posted 2001-12-31 04:43 PM


This evokes a feeling of peaceful contentment.  One is lucky to have these feelings.  Thank you for the share.  
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