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VAS
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0 posted 2001-12-27 01:09 PM



sitting in the middle
of the presents that surround
increments of love said
sentiments abound

glittering lights
wrapping-paper smiles
all kinds of sweet
holiday wiles

candy cane crumbles
chocolate chips
visions of tinsel
psychodelic trips

early winter's morning
dawning way past nine
nestled in a comforter
feeling awf'ly fine

watching Christmas morning
rise up with the sun
waiting in the sparkle
of holiday fun!

Copyright Dec.25, 2001

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2001-12-27 01:13 PM


VAS,
A lovely write, enjoyed

Hypnosis
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since 2001-12-02
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2 posted 2001-12-27 01:16 PM


Isn't Christmasd morning one of the greatest feelings in the world.  It is filled with just so much love and happiness.  (smiles)  Great descriptions, it made the write that much more appealing.

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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3 posted 2001-12-27 01:57 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, I know just how you feel; I can't help but be excited and wake at around 5:30 in the morning Christmas Day to watch the sun go up and see the crystal canvas of morning. (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words shine with holiday cheer! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Virginia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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