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Son Netier
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0 posted 2001-12-27 12:21 PM


Too much to do today to be away,
Too short the time that we can share alone,
Too large the crowds that fill the malls today,
Too long the wait till I get you back home.

To be with you in the candle’s glowing,
To see just you and you to be with me,
To tell you of the love inside growing,
To keep for me only all your beauty.

Two hands holding one another gently,
Two hearts beating strong together always,
Two eyes looking so soft and intently,
Two minds alike in so many of ways.

Tomorrow comes and you take to the sky,
Till you return with you my heart does fly.

Bill


© Copyright 2001 Bill Shivers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-27 12:25 PM




BRAVO!!! I LOVE IT!!! (smiles) What a beautiful poem to celebrate 100!!! You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may love forever shine in your soul! Here's to many more, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-27 12:25 PM


*sigh* very beautiful ... I love it. Congradulations on your 100th post...**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (12-27-2001 12:26 PM).]

Poet deVine
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3 posted 2001-12-27 03:39 PM


Simply lovely. A nice soothing break from the frenetic holiday aftermath.

And congratulations on post number 100!!


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4 posted 2001-12-27 04:42 PM


A very beautifully penned 100th post!!
CONGRATULATIONS!!
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

ecrivan
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5 posted 2001-12-27 05:12 PM


congradulations onthe 100th post, I know the euphoria, and good job on the different uses of to,two,too!


Son Netier
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6 posted 2001-12-29 06:13 AM


Thank you all,
For you sweet responses.

Bill

Nan
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7 posted 2001-12-29 09:16 AM


Wow - 100 already - and we all feel like we know you and your mystery lady so well... Nice work, m'friend..
vlraynes
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8 posted 2001-12-30 02:32 AM



Son Netier-
  This is a beautiful write.
  Congrats on 100!
  ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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9 posted 2001-12-30 07:38 AM



Not quite sure what she did to you, but she did it very, very right...

Kethry
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10 posted 2001-12-30 07:47 AM


Son Netier,
It's been too long since I've read you. Congratulations on the 100th.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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