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I Love You Too
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I Love You Too |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Rewrite Repost: I love you too She processes the mundane day. Into priorities. Shifting slots into care and not, Into categories. It is a calibration planned, A regimentation. Placing items is a time slot, For consideration. It is a good plan and it works, Doing things concisely. The day flies by in ordered form, Wrapped and done precisely. But I am not a memo slip, To place within a file. The kiss the peck the hello dear, Has lost its loving style. I'll post this on her memos main Be wary of the processed brain. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I need to make a list of all the things I have to do I'll start with the reminder to send a winkie to you. I'll put in my planner to send you a winkie each day I'll mark it on my calendar for when my memory might sway. I'll put up those posty notes that remind with colors bright... that way I wont forget to send you a winkie every night. I'll tie a string around my finger to keep me on my toes... tomorrow I'll send you a winkie winkie with a rose. I dont need all these things to remind me of you. Its just something we winkie list makers do.  *L*WINKIE WINKIE me sweet Stinky |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Seymour, I understand this......very well. Excellent write. I'm saving this  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) So wonderfully expressed, dearest friend, your words are always so creatively expressed! I believe I understand this too! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"But I am not a memo slip, To place within a file. The kiss the peck the hello dear, Has lost its loving style" ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* when making up your list shifting each to divide and prioritize remember I’m not a little thing I should be the greatest in size when you write my name don’t bother penciling me in for if I’m not the ink of your heart the tattoo of me fades and erases again sy...understand this well...helen |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Processed brains always did scare the hell outta me, sy! I adore this one--must have missed it the first time--I too understand the feeling of being "penciled in" to someone's daily agenda. This one, my friend, is a "sy" classic! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* there is nothing like a person who has to plan love into their lives. Love should just be allowed to happen..that way the fires of passion will always burn hot. Very well said. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Without your winkie winkie how would I become a twinkie? WW R S Sea, Are you on the meno pad too? LOL *L* Mistletoe, I think you do too. Helen, I agree, off the memo pad, LOL *L* Serenity, Glad you enjoyed. *L* |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Sy - Great poem. As for pencilling in love, when I was unattached and looking to be attached, I still penciled in love - the list was very short: 1. Get some love 2. Get some more love 3. kick a kitty 4. Get some love.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LJA, I think you got the needle caught in the groove. LOL & ROTF |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime, Missed you in the cross. You are absolutely right. *L* |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
In grant the daily aptitude makes us all a little rude where has all the wooing gone? far and away, the flower's song... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Exactely, *L* |
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