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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Enchanted Lady Precious,Lady Fair... Locks of crimson,blaze your dare... Rainbow eyes,heart of gold… So distant yet so near. Lady of comfort,Lady of joy… Turn my heart into a toy… Knight in waiting,call’s to you… Mounted,set to ride. Child like wonder,a womans scheme… Lusty innocence,dreamer’s dream… Hear my offer,partake or nay? Each breath a new beginning. Live like it's your last day... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is lovely, and the flow is wonderful! Very nice  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
a lady of wonder, a lady of joy..wonderfully expressed! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo enchanting, you paint love with all the magic colors of fantasy and beauty! (smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may your heart forever shine in true love with hers! (big hugggsssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ray, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!BRAVO!!!!This poem is absolutely enchanting. I am sure she will love it and respond the way you desire. Wonderful writing that sang beautifully. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
What beauty in these words. Enchanting indeed. I enjoyed this very much If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
bbent, I agree with the others that replied I like this.. I'm glad I stopped in.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bbent, You bent me, enjoyed. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Romantically written, I enjoed very much. This must be an important love for you, I wish the best for it to last forever and create happiness in lives. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh My!! This lady is very impressed! Love it indeed! ~Smiles and Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
What a nice suprize to find all the kind replies...I thank you all,and hope you all know how much I've enjoyed your efforts over the last year or so.Thanks again,you made this day. Live like it's your last day... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
this is enchanting! I love that word btw! I am/Kathleen/ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
bbent--My favorite line is the last, for it is so true, each breath IS a new beginning. A lovely and romantic poem here. |
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