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Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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0 posted 2001-12-27 01:41 AM



Where, pray tell, did it all begin
and how far do we go before the end
I know in my soul, you were always there
in my heart’s beat, you’ll always share

It wasn’t the smile, it wasn’t the look
nor even the words coming from a book
It was…it is…ahh, how do you explain
the feeling of being, once more again

Only the warmth of the summer sun
can match what you give and what you have done
What was, is, and is, ever was
and ever it be, as ever it does

But for the moment in time, that is this place
we stand together in close embrace
No words are needed, no words to say
we only have times moments before going away

When you came, we knew it then
and grasped the moment in sweet begin
Humans not, seeking spiritual bond
only spirits reliving from the beyond

So on this spot of earth we hold
this is the time of our behold
Swirls of life force that gathered deep
bringing together in constant keep


© Copyright 2001 Logan - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 2001-12-27 07:19 AM


I know in my soul, you were always there
in my heart’s beat, you’ll always share
=======================================
It was…it is…ahh, how do you explain
the feeling of being, once more again
========================================
What was, is, and is, ever was
and ever it be, as ever it does


But for the moment in time, that is this place
we stand together in close embrace
No words are needed, no words to say
we only have times moments before going away
======================================
So on this spot of earth we hold
this is the time of our behold
Swirls of life force that gathered deep
bringing together in constant keep

=======================================

Logan, Logan, Logan, ... sweet keeper of time and rhyme....my my my you are well inspired my friend...this is lovely and so very very YOU.

      

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.


catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-12-27 07:27 AM


Such a beautiful love expressed here. How fortunate to find it, and live it in the present.
Love this lots, L
Sandra

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with you
3 posted 2001-12-27 09:45 AM


Logan, this is fantastic!!!! I am keeping this!
Martie
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4 posted 2001-12-27 10:19 AM


Logan--Big smile for this one, dear man!
Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-12-27 12:07 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you and your love be embraced in the present and ever after in the blessings of true love! (smiles) We all love you so uch, sweet friend, your words are a delight to us all! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
6 posted 2001-12-27 12:12 PM


*sigh* simply beautiful. Filled with true feelings from an honest heart. I am sure she loves this poem. A very lucky lady. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding
7 posted 2001-12-27 12:32 PM


What a beauty this poem is. Such tender words, such loving emotion. We are truly blessed when someone touches us in this way.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

8 posted 2001-12-27 12:37 PM


Nothing could add any more beauty to this, it is such a work of art. Wow is all I can muster.

iambic-
I am/Kathleen

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Gaia
9 posted 2001-12-27 01:44 PM


I saved this one before I was half way through reading it. Stunning.

"Only the warmth of the summer sun
can match what you give and what you have done
What was, is, and is, ever was
and ever it be, as ever it does"

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
10 posted 2001-12-27 03:51 PM


Only the warmth of the summer sun
can match what you give and what you have done
What was, is, and is, ever was
and ever it be, as ever it does
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dear Logan....this is so YOU!  Ah, dear heart you pen 'truth' so very well.  A keeper this one is...
*a soft smile along with a hug.*

*~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~*

Temptress
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11 posted 2001-12-27 08:50 PM


Sweet Logan. I do miss your work. I'm having computer and phone problems. I hope to be back soon.

MERRY CHRISTMAS, DARLINGS....
If you can't find your cup of Christmas cheer, you may have a cup of mine!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
12 posted 2001-12-30 08:09 AM



Ah, pick a line where you hear song
where two have met all along
where comes a time of sweet recall
beyond the lines of grayer pall...

Logan, Logan, Logan...how you weave...

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