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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
How far would I have to go back to find no regret then, again what point to that I don’t want to start over only forget or perhaps disappear just a bit. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Do not try to disappear or even think back beyond regret, dear man...for it is not possible. Just be the best you can be a little more each day and your past will fade away little by little as the wonderful man you are is allowed to surface. ** big hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Duncan, Or even learn to live with it.  |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
I know this feeling exactly! Well expressed with few words~ Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I know this feeling, it's a lonely one. iambic- |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Hey, I know somewhere you can disappear...might have trouble finding it though...it's just a big black spot on your map!!! Lol If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, duncan! Can I hitch a ride???  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh boy, I understand this feeling well. You know, hoidays can be tough to get through for a lot of people. Sounds like yours was not so much happier than mine. But I think next year is looking good.. Sandra |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
what dont kill us ... makes us poets? I always say I need a vacation from me. In your classic Duncan consice style, you evoke emotions that we all relate to well.. no words wasted...succinct and sharp. well done poet sir. jm You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Duncan: There are times when you are looking for a cave to hide in and have peace and quiet. A time to reflect on what is happening in your life. Have no regrets - just hope for a happier future. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Time heals all,it will wash away the blues, yet there is always the past and unsightly residues.Sigh! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
some days, I wish I could disappear a bit too....other days, you'd think I had....I relate to this always enjoy your writings |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
My regrets once followed me with every step I took. I'm learning to file them under a different label. Now they are just 'some thoughts.' I enjoyed the thoughts in this well written piece.  |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Time will heal all wounds, but not without leaving a scar in the end. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Duncan - Right on the money! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Not forget or disappear, but forgive ourselves, its part of our human nature to make mistakes. Great poem, I think we all need to do some of that.  |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Duncan - Excellent write. It's short, but it says a lot, at least to me because I can relate to this one so well. Nicely done. Dave |
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Virgo_Rains Member
since 2001-12-03
Posts 54Pacific Northwest, U.S.A. |
No use to fret over past regret but fall into tomorrow with hopes for no more sorrow.. Duncan, Your poem made me think of the time I have spent thinking of "if only"....Good job..simply said! |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123 |
Loved the form , the brevity and of course the message. thanks. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
sighhhhhh.... I missed this one but caught up2it now... Smiles2uPoetFriendDunan *~coco~* |
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