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Guardurthoughts
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since 2001-10-16
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0 posted 2001-12-26 09:46 PM



High above the Mountain tops
We soar above the Clouds
We hold each other’s hands as tightly as we can
We are flying to an imaginary land

To our delight, we hear the sweet songs of the robins
And the Chirping of the young
We settle down among some trees not wanting to be found
God alone knows where we are now

The sun is shining brightly kissing our skin so sweetly
We sit down and rest for our wings are getting restless
You sweep the hair out of my face and look intently into my eyes
I ask you what you see
I see great big skies of blue and silver all sparkly for me
I smile a great big smile and send it right to you
You smile back and sweetly whisper
“I love you”

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~
"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

© Copyright 2001 Erica Grover - All Rights Reserved
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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1 posted 2001-12-26 09:53 PM


this is the kind of feeling I love reading about, I guess I will never change.

iambic-
I am/Kathleen

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
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2 posted 2001-12-26 11:26 PM


I'm with Irish Rose and have no desire to change. These kinds of poems suit me perfectly. *sigh* lovely. Thank you. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-12-27 12:18 PM




(sigh) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet Erica, your words reflect the beauty seen looking through loves eyes! (smiles) I LOVE IT!!! (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo romantic, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erica, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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