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Primordial Dance
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Primordial Dance |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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She dances by the ocean and builds castles in the sand she breathes the mists of freedom as she reaches out her hand. Approaching through the dark depths he arises from the waves and steps onto the white beach in response to call she gave. They twirl eachother madly in the dance of ages old with passions born together they relive their stories told. Much later as the sun sets and the stars begin to glow they step into the waters, thus return to long ago. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (12-26-2001 03:55 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Beautiful...this is absolutely beautiful. You weave a vision that calls out to the romantic soul of each of us. I love it, Sandra....stunning. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely romantic visions Sandra..loved it ..hugs  ~Victoria~ |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, Sandra, I always love it when you bring the ocean into your words that sing like this. Wonderful thoughts and bringing it all together...very gentle smile and happy holidays to you |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sandra- Absolutely beautiful, my friend. I just LOVE this. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Very romantic and SEXY! (raising eyebrows up and down wickedly) SO Sandra, ahem, what, pray tell, did YOU get for xmas? Loved this...but there's something about a primordial dance that um, gets my juices flowing!  Laughter, hugs, and applause to you! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, I hope you really have felt love for you deserve the most beautiful love and happiness in the world! (kiss on cheek) I hope ou had the happiest holidays, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! Absolutely beautifully brethtaking! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Sandra...did Santa bring you something this year? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Whoo Hoo Sandra!! This one is sooo sensual.....Oh, how I love it! ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing everyone a New Year filled with Peace & Love ~* |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is just lovely, Sandra. Very good. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed this feeling, I wish I lived closer to the ocean. iambic- |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks everyone. Just for the record, Santa did not bring me a wonderful new love or anything remotely close. I was just in a good mood. Happy New Year to all. Sandra |
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Glenn Logan Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 111Virginia |
Wonderfully lyric! Glenn Logan |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh Sandra, this is a beauty. What a lovely dance, what perfect romance. I love this one, it sings to my soul. |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
This was very good! I liked this very much. It had vivid imagery, very nice write Sandra. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sandra, I kept seeing a mermaid and Neptune and....this was such a delightful read! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the lady of the ocean sings another song of life. . . well done. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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