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Carol Luna
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0 posted 2001-12-26 03:34 PM




i wrote a beautiful message
from a place i dug deep
every wretched emotion, asking forgiveness,

i wondered if you would believe my rant,
if i would believe myself.
Funny thing though, i was out of paper,
no pc available and so
i wrote them in the sand.
By the time you would have read it well, the tide
had washed my words out to sea.

Maybe they are best left there.


Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~


[This message has been edited by Carol Luna (12-26-2001 04:40 PM).]

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1 posted 2001-12-26 03:43 PM


*sigh* such sadness in your words. I don't know if it is better they were left unsaid...let your heart be your guide. I hope and pray the New Year will find your heart filled with the love you desire. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2002-02-11 03:57 PM


aw I wish things would have ended differently! You deserve true love
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-01-26 05:18 AM


maybe...
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2004-08-12 12:02 PM


Nice try...I think you should still ask for forgiveness...because it was a desire in your heart wanting to be given or received...James
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