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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state

0 posted 2001-12-26 01:08 PM



Man got tired of the views he spent
holiday of vain cheer and days of lent,
heard of hooking into a cyber exchange
with labs that would test his mind's range.


So off to a cyber farm his mind went
his cyclic brainwave activity would vent;
the object was to cool his passions
that zen buddists were to ration.


The mystery of the mind appears to be
what at earthly levels we cannot see,
but with some manipulation of the mind
brain activity control is researcher's find.



[This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-26-2001 01:25 PM).]

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Opeth
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since 2001-12-13
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The Ravines
1 posted 2001-12-26 01:13 PM


Well rhymed and enjoyable to read...

While reading...I got a vision of the Simpson's episode where Homer and his family are hooked up to a pyschological testing machine and the family kept zapping the hell out of each other.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-12-26 01:17 PM


*cracking up laughing at O--Simpson's fan here*

and ecrivan? your poetry is well written and intelligent, you are now on my list of "must-reads"! I am enjoying much!

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
3 posted 2001-12-26 01:24 PM


am a simpson's fan myself that the funny side
of the search for gophers like you or me to extend man's understanding of the unknown. like alchemy, think I'll leave it alone


Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
4 posted 2001-12-26 01:35 PM


You weave your words to make the mind of your reader reach just a little deeper into the understanding of the mind. Very well put...I love the way your words flowed too...felt like you were not only asking others but yourself as well. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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