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Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-12-26 10:12 AM

Oh silent is the moonlit night
As silver shadow dance on sheets
Lacey patterns in purple light
As yellow races in rivulets to greet
Oh! Freeze the now of natures seat

Hush old moon and fall asleep
As patterns of lace begin to fall
Tears trace gently in silent weep
For what is more beautiful all
Then memories in the heart to keep
of the greatest love felt true and deep?

Beautiful, blessed silence knows well
Amidst the softly falling snow
In the fondling pastels
Of expressions only our love shall know
Silence in the night brings us closer to our souls

For to awaken with created wings
With mine love who truly sees
Purifies the air as winter sings
And flavors the snow with passions breeze
Such as nature begins a earthen tease

To Love you...Oh yes You!
Is to know loves limit does not exist
For even the stormy night has quiet hue
Encased in softest mist
When you give..tenderly..of your kiss...

S.D.K. 12/21/01

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-12-26 10:30 AM

this is splendid writing...I loved the creative rhyme scheme...great cadence...
wonderful poetic phrasing...and imagery
the whole write was full of energy in its inspire.
very well done Virgo Rains.
jm

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

2 posted 2001-12-26 10:35 AM

This is a truly beautiful poem of love and tenderness. You have written the feelings so well, the reader gets the full essence of the magic.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-12-26 11:20 AM

(smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, the sheer serenity of pure love echoes in your lovely visions! (smiles) May true love forever fill your heart, sweet friend! (big hugggssssss) I hope you had the happiest holidays, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

4 posted 2001-12-26 11:24 AM

The love and tenderness flow throughout these words.Nice job.
peaches

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2001-12-26 06:19 PM

Virgo_Rains-
This is really beautiful.
Wonderful writing.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

6 posted 2001-12-26 06:38 PM

Awww! This poem is so romantic...loved the iamgery!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

Virgo_Rains
Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 54
Pacific Northwest, U.S.A.

7 posted 2001-12-28 09:52 AM

Thank you Janet Marie, Tracey, Mistletoe Angel, Peaches, Vlrayne, and Domzi for your great comments...You are all inspirers of emotions from the heart

VR

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