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Dawn Eclipse
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since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

0 posted 2001-12-25 09:24 PM

Time passes slowly within a mind fogged with fear
It has no boundary
Emotions shroud me, overcome with a tear
Nothing more can I bear.

Yet it comes again

Feelings long buried now emerge from the mist
Overcoming a feeling of dread
Love allows me to forgive all the wr ongs of my list
But how much can I forget?

Answers appear as nothing but more questions

To forget the torture is like trying to forget how the sun sets in the west
Yet a force drives me ahead.
I will not let fear get the best
My spirit will not die like the rest

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 2001-12-25 09:32 PM

Such deep sorrow coming from a sweet heart, my friend. I liked the feel of this, especially the single lines between the verses. I also liked the hope at the end. Always keep the hope and that cute smile on your face. Luv ya much, dearie.

*Krista Knutson*

"An eye for an eye only ends up making the whole world blind." -Gandhi

Dusk Treader

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Senior Member

since 1999-06-18

Posts 1187
St. Paul, MN

2 posted 2001-12-25 10:22 PM

Such sadness in this piece.. but the ending shows a turn from lamenting for the past to striving for a bright future. Wonderful poem, Cassie, I love the single lines between verses, also, they provide a nice transisiton. Keep writing my friend, it may help you find more answers!

Many smiles,
Abrahm

"A hard, cold wisom is required for goodness to accomplish good. Goodness without wisdom always accomplishes evil" - Robert Heinlein

EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07

Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...

3 posted 2001-12-25 10:50 PM

"Time passes slowly within a mind fogged with fear"

Indeed it does! I greatly enjoyed reading this one.

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

4 posted 2001-12-26 01:35 AM

Such sadness, but such hope at the end.Always keep this hope alive.
peaches

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