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Master
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0 posted 2001-12-25 02:07 AM


First snow.
The earth put on her gown,--
at once, both fleeting and eternal.
I watched how fast the naked ground
transformed into somebody’s journal.

My footprints bared a patch of granite.
I grieved beneath the burdened pines
that no one else upon the planet
appeared to read between the lines.


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[This message has been edited by Master (12-25-2001 11:25 AM).]

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1 posted 2001-12-25 02:08 AM


"I watched how fast the naked ground
transformed into somebody’s journal."

I absolutely love that part.....
Merry Christmas!!

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
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2 posted 2001-12-25 02:26 AM


is this something like be careful where your footsteps lead for every step will show, kind of thing, it stikes me as such...we tend to think the snow hides all too, is another angle. Nicely done


vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
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3 posted 2001-12-26 01:35 AM



Master-
   I have always enjoyed your work, and
   this is no exception.
   Very cool write, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

peaches73533
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since 2001-11-04
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4 posted 2001-12-26 01:37 AM


Very nice write.
peaches

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