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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-12-24 08:20 PM



If you are feeling lonely tonight nobody there to talk to
Come sit with me and we will chat my arm I lay around you
I'll comfort you with lovely words coming from my heart
Cause lonelyness can be a burden, come and do take part
You may tell me a funny story and perhaps I'll tell you a joke
And we'll have laughter and giggles untill we nearly choke
Tonight will be a special night for Christmas is there tomorrow
So please come over and sit with me, let's get rid of the sorrow
For Christmas is a happy time when candles show their light
The birth of a little boy far away shine upon by a star bright
So if you are feeling lonely tonight come share with me your love
We'll talk about the peace to come brought by a little white dove





A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link.

[This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (12-24-2001 09:22 PM).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2001-12-24 08:27 PM


"You may tell me a funny story and perhaps I'll tell you a joke
And we'll have laughter and giggles untill we nearly choke"

I wish I could come hang out with you, it'd be a great time (((hugs))) and Merry Christmas to you!!!!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-12-24 08:39 PM


Titia,
A lovely gentle write, enjoyed

Ariana
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3 posted 2001-12-24 08:43 PM


Titia:

I would love to come and be with you too.  Yes, Christmas can be very lonely if you have no one to be with you.  I would sit and have coffee with you and I bet we would have a grand time.  Thank you for the offer.  Your words were very thoughtful and are full of meaning.  Thank you for sharing with us.

Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-12-24 09:10 PM


yes, I am feeling very lonely but I am not alone.

That is the worst kind.

Thank you dear lady.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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5 posted 2001-12-24 09:16 PM


Aw, I don't want anyone to be alone on Christmas!  I will come and hang out with you, it would be a fun fun time!

    Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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6 posted 2001-12-24 09:19 PM


'You may tell me a funny story and perhaps I'll tell you a joke
And we'll have laughter and giggles untill we nearly choke'

What a great poem, Titia!  I love these lines, especially...wonderfully written!

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And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

Jamie
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7 posted 2001-12-24 09:23 PM


wonderful sentiments
Duncan
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8 posted 2001-12-24 09:35 PM


Come sit with me and we will chat my arm I lay around you
I'll comfort you with lovely words coming from my heart

I get this image of resting on an overstuffed, perfectly broken in sofa...just listening to you.  The night is warm with comfort.  Thank you, Titia.

Titia Geertman
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9 posted 2001-12-25 10:02 PM


SEA, I'm choking already LOL

Seymour, glad you enjoyed

Ariana, always glad to see a 'new' face, I'll put the kettle on.

Kathleen, I HUG you and hold you thight.

Hypnoses, you come over and we'll have a party (I hope I did say welcome to you?)

Snowpants and Jamie, thank you

Duncan, how did you know what my sofa looks like???? Always an arm around you my friend and an open place at my sofa

HUGS to you all, Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link.

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10 posted 2001-12-26 10:51 PM


Titia, this poem is the perfect description of a true friend. Who ever has you for one is blessed indeed. Beautiful writing, m'lady
SmartChick
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11 posted 2001-12-26 11:31 PM


Wish I could come join you, Titia. I would tell you some stories and listen to your jokes.  
Startime
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12 posted 2001-12-26 11:38 PM


After reading your poem I am not feeling so lonely....thank you, Titia. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

vlraynes
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13 posted 2001-12-30 03:30 AM



Titia-
I know I'm a little late for Christmas, but
can I come hang out with you anyway?

You are just soooooooo sweet, my friend.
I just LOVE you.
Hugs,
~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Titia Geertman
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14 posted 2001-12-30 07:10 AM


Balladeer, you'll always be my friend

Smartchick, you're so welcome

Startime, big HUGS back dear

Vicky, Christmas or not it would be a thrill to laugh and giggle with you, so do come over any time you wish, love you too

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Want to use the pics on my website? Just send me a mail and I'll give you the link.

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15 posted 2001-12-31 07:35 PM


SweetTitia~
Bill and I want to join Vicky and have a blast of blessings at your house~

'So if you are feeling lonely tonight come share with me your love
We'll talk about the peace to come brought by a little white dove'


Thank you sweet friend .. you are a blessing that has happened in my heart~
Thank you for being here~
I love you~
Happy New Year~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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16 posted 2001-12-31 09:22 PM


Titia, I can imagine sitting with you exactly like you have said.  You are the most inviting person I have "met", and the greatest ambassador of the Netherlands that is for sure!  Happy New Year to you and yours!

~*~ Happy New Year ~*~
~* Carpe' Diem *~

Bill Charles
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17 posted 2001-12-31 10:16 PM


Titia - thank you for this lovely poem my friend. I'm so glad I had a chance to read it. It is very touching...

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU AND YOURS...

BC

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