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I Will Take It....
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I Will Take It.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Take me into your arms Hold me...for my life is yours. Give me tenderness, as I do you as well. Share the hope of dreams. Think of me, smile...knowing I am.. Laugh, for I laugh with you. Shed my tear if you must... I will take it away... |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Magnus, this poem is so touching. What did you feel when you wrote it? Reading it, your love would probably feel very cherished, and treasured. It's just such a wonderful feeling.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
A well written poem for that special person in your life, I do believe. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Precious. Most of us are givers...every once in a while, we need a "taker" such as this. Oh yes...it's also a Keeper... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mon Cherie...at that moment...I was feeling the desire to be close...knowing that the closeness would be appreciated... Thank You for the response.. Happy Holidays... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Opeth...thank you...sometimes the little poems hold as much meaning as any drawn out one ever could...Just felt that was what needed to be done... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A keeper and a taker...and a giver and a shaker... Thank You Karilea...happy that you like this little one... Happy Holidays to you and yours... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) So short but beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend! (sigh) I'm so happy to feel you're so happy deep inside your heart, and I wish you eternal happiness with true love! (big hugggssss) Your lovely words never cease to amaze me! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Barry, You write some of the sweetest poems I greatly enjoyed this little beauty Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Magnus - great write you have done here. Enjoyed it. And yes, I have been very busy, but enjoying all of it... Merry Christmas to you and yours... BC |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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