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Tennessee Angel
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0 posted 2001-12-23 11:22 PM


If I were to leave this world
and not be seen on earth again,
I know without a doubt I would
be missed by many a friend.

When they look back on my life
and the way in which I lived,
I hope they focus not on what I had
but on what I had to give.

May they speak not of the things
that with money were bought and sold.
Lord, let them not dwell upon
foolish stories I may have told.

Whenever they remember me
let there be a smile upon their face.
May they recall how oft' I spoke
of your amazing grace.

I pray that they could truly tell
by the way my days were spent,
that I was a child of yours
and there's no doubt where I went.

I know that there were times
when I was less than I should have been.
Please let them just forgive and forget
whenever they remember when.

I lay here on my bed tonight,
such a strange prayer I know.
The world seems to be moving fast
and I don't know when I will go.

So let me live each day, my Lord,
as though I won't be here again
and let them only remember you
whenever they remember when.

[This message has been edited by Tennessee Angel (12-23-2001 11:25 PM).]

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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-12-23 11:27 PM




(sigh) Oh Stacy, this is the most beautiful prayer in looking up to a New Year, we all love you so much, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) May the New Year bring you many new joys and hopes, as will you forgive and forget of all those lesser times and hold on to cherished memories! (sigh) You are an angel to us all, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stacy, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-23 11:58 PM


we will remember you. . . for He will never let us forget. . .

heartfelt my friend. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

shoffswife
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since 2001-12-23
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KY, US
3 posted 2001-12-24 03:52 AM


oh my god.  i know how you feel.  i have been thinking almost the same thing lately.  no one knows when their day has come, but when mine does, i want my friends and family to smile and laugh when they think of me.
thank you.  it was a beautiful poem.

snowpants
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4 posted 2001-12-24 04:16 AM


'I lay here on my bed tonight,
such a strange prayer I know.
The world seems to be moving fast
and I don't know when I will go.

So let me live each day, my Lord,
as though I won't be here again
and let them only remember you
whenever they remember when.'

Beautiful prayer, TA...truly what we should all wish for!  Great write!

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you can change the weather...

Larry C
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5 posted 2001-12-27 12:42 PM


Tennessee Angel,
Wonderful prayer and marvelous thoughts. This is a keeper. Thank you so much!

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