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Nate Dogg
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0 posted 2001-12-23 07:43 PM


Hello folks, I back again! I guess you can call me lazy cause, this is the same poem I post every christmas...anyways, Merry Christmas to all!

In the city of Atlanta,
it's definitely that year
cause, I can see, feel, hear,
and smell christmas in the air.
Bright and colorful lights
and beautifully decorated trees,
are all in sight.
Some stores are passing out
free candy to everybody.
Man, I've never seen,
people so happy
as complete strangers,
are telling me "merry christmas!"
Man, I love it and I wish,
that life could carry on like this.
I walked down peachtree street,
to see the the citys' christmas tree
and man, it was so beauitful, tall, and so big
and the decorators covered every piece, every twig.
Then I walked down to the street,
to buy christmas treats
as all the stores,
were packed with eager buyers.
At k-mart singing silent night,
was my church choir.
I joined them and sang along to the song
and after that, I went shopping for my mom.
I bought my item and left
and when I came home, to catch my breath
the angelic flights, of silent night,
was ringing in my ears to death
but, I don't care
cause, this is christmas,
the best time of the year.

[This message has been edited by Nate Dogg (12-23-2001 07:47 PM).]

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ecrivan
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1 posted 2001-12-23 07:46 PM


A Happy Holiday to You and may your good rhyme and spirits carry on!


Nate Dogg
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2 posted 2001-12-23 07:47 PM


Thank you very much!!

Nathan

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3 posted 2001-12-23 08:57 PM




(smiles) Oh Nate, this is soooooooo beautiful, I wish I was here before to read this beautiful classic previous years! (big hugggssssss) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all wish you the happiest holidays! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-12-23 09:12 PM


And a Merry Christmas to you Nate ... much enjoyed all of your wonderful Christmas spirit in this piece!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2001-12-23 09:36 PM


Happy Holidays to you Nate! Be safe, and have fun! (((Big Hugs)))

RP

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2001-12-23 11:02 PM


Yeah I went to downtown Honolulu the other night and the lights and decorations are beautiful...its beginning to look a lot like Christmas...the best part is sharing it with family and friends...Have a wonderful Christmas...James
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7 posted 2001-12-23 11:15 PM


*MERRY CHRISTMAS NATE!*
Loved the poem!
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

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8 posted 2001-12-23 11:23 PM


Nate, this is my first time reading your Christmas poem, it's very nice and makes  for big smiles....

I hope you have a great Christmas

Sven
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9 posted 2001-12-23 11:59 PM


you got that right Nate!!  

great job. . . Merry Christmas and peace to you and yours my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Nate Dogg
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Georgia, Fulton
10 posted 2001-12-24 09:22 AM


Thanks guys!

Nathan

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