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MARK V SHELDON
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0 posted 2001-12-23 07:15 PM


"TWENTY OR LESS...#65"
Copyright 2001 by: MARK V SHELDON


lured
by a camouflaged melody
silky smooth
and effortless
like words never could


"Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace

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© Copyright 2001 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-23 07:19 PM




(smiles) Its so beautiful how the sound of music is so smooth like silk as it is sung from all our hearts! (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your words are always a delight to read! (big hugggssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Mark, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-23 07:22 PM


interesting write Mark, keep it going


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3 posted 2001-12-23 08:47 PM


Mark, this made me think of the ocean....I really like this one Have a Merry Christmas
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4 posted 2001-12-25 09:57 PM


This gives a very definite feel in such a short space. Like lots, Mark.
Happy Christmas
Sandra

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5 posted 2001-12-26 12:41 PM


Lured again,
by a title.
Happy holidays, Mark.

May the ripple of LOVE
become the wave of PEACE

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6 posted 2001-12-26 12:46 PM


Your words always lure me in.Nice write.
peaches

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7 posted 2001-12-26 12:41 PM


Very well done, Mark. This flows like quicksilver, never ending..I enjoyed this, my friend...gentle smile
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