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vandana
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0 posted 2001-12-23 05:43 PM



Somewhere In my heart
I believe that
I will find love
Love that I can have
Where can I be?
In all I can be
Is In your heart,
Loving you,
so true ,
so deeply,
Where can I be?
I can In your heart
That Is all I need
Where can I be?I know,
Deep In my heart,
Where can I be?
Can I be In your heart?
I wonder sometimes
The reason why,
Seasons changes
Wheremy heart can be?
my heart can be yours,
Where can I be?
I can be In your heart,
I can only be yours
In your heart,
Where I can be?
Where can I be?

[This message has been edited by vandana (12-23-2001 05:45 PM).]

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Sven
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1 posted 2001-12-23 05:44 PM


where can you be?

wherever you are. . .

wonderfully done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-12-23 05:48 PM


Well I believe love is looking for you also...so you have a good chance...keep believing...James
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3 posted 2001-12-23 05:51 PM


I'm sure where ever you are, love is close.....
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4 posted 2001-12-23 06:10 PM


I feel such hope and conviction in your words.  It was very moving.  Roger


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5 posted 2001-12-23 06:46 PM


I hope you can be wherever you desire...
This poem expresses that need...You certainly
deserve that pleasure..

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6 posted 2001-12-23 06:57 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo beautifully upbeat, sweet friend, I hope you find all the love your golden heart deserves and desires! (kiss on cheek) Love is where you belong, sweet friend, may love fill your heart ever after! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
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7 posted 2001-12-23 07:43 PM


I like the use of questions too in my poems
but tend to limit the amount, you message is nice though


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