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GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

0 posted 2001-12-23 04:04 PM

Tiny feathers dot the sky
as they flutter to the ground
to join it in a sweet embrace
The boughs above adorned in white
are bending ever so slightly

Night comes and the ground gleams,
donning its seasonal coat
Peace in its truest form is reached,
as the earth stands still
for a few faint moments,
or so it seems

[This message has been edited by GenXer (12-23-2001 04:05 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-23 04:12 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet David, the beauty of day and night shines through your lovely words! (smiles) May natures boughs forever bloom and bring the art of Mother Nature to us all to behold! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

2 posted 2001-12-23 05:01 PM

Dave,

What wonderful images you created

I liked it

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-12-23 06:29 PM

very nice

I am still waiting for the snow levels to drop just a bit, then I'll actually get some!!

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

4 posted 2001-12-23 07:32 PM

Dave,

what wonderful visual imagery you've got here
like on a crisp clear wintery night!

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

5 posted 2001-12-23 07:48 PM

Some really beautiful imagery, Dave and so very well composed. I love the barely noticeable rhyme scheme!
We actually had a bit of snow today, and a little bit of it actually stuck to the roads, making them a bit slippery...and our little pond has some ice on it which is covered with snow and looks quite pretty.
Almost as beautiful as your poem.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

6 posted 2001-12-24 01:58 AM

Thank you all for reading this. We haven't had any snow this year here in NY. Maybe in January, but it has been a pretty warm winter so far.

Dave

[This message has been edited by GenXer (12-24-2001 12:47 PM).]

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