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Startime
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0 posted 2001-12-23 02:00 PM


Simple Words

Just simple words that I can say
coming from deep within
Heartfelt meaning that they convey
saying what thoughts begin

Three little words saying so much
wanting to show I care
Wishing to feel your tender touch
and with you passion share

With a tear I send them your way
knowing you will hear them
Now flown to you without delay
a precious little gem

These words I give to you with love
whisper...I'm Missing You
You are the one my heart speaks of
because...I'm Missing You

Karen Torbiak 2001©



Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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with you
1 posted 2001-12-23 02:03 PM


Karen, this is so nice makes me remember those I miss too.....
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2001-12-23 02:37 PM


Yes you find yourself thinking about them so much...James
Victoria
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3 posted 2001-12-23 02:49 PM


missing someone can make the heart flow with teardrops..hopefully it wont be for long..hugs
                  
                          ~Victoria~

Bill Charles
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4 posted 2001-12-23 03:43 PM


Startime - simple words that mean so much. Merry Christmas to you...

BC

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5 posted 2001-12-23 03:48 PM


Karen~Yes, it is the time of year for holiday cheer, but also for missing those we love and can't be with.  Well done.
*Happy Holiday Hugs, Nancy*

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

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6 posted 2001-12-23 06:14 PM


Karen...a beautiful and tender write..
expressed with truth of feelings...

Merry Christmas little Canadian lady...
Give Erin a hug from all of us here
in SC...USA....

Barry

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7 posted 2001-12-23 07:11 PM


softly said, Karen, may your holiday be a sweet one

Kathleen (Kay)
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8 posted 2001-12-23 07:25 PM


charged with sentiment and from the heart, nicely said


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9 posted 2001-12-23 09:25 PM


Beautifully said, Startime. It is that time of year we miss special people all that much more...merry Christmas
D.Lester Young
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10 posted 2001-12-23 10:53 PM


Happy Holidays to a great person and POET who reaching into herself and pulls out flower gardens of beauty out.
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11 posted 2001-12-24 11:07 AM


Merry Christmas Karen.....I wish you Peace....   Love these words....


Lauren~

Tomorrow's another day
and I'm thirsty any way
so bring on the rain

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12 posted 2001-12-24 11:38 AM



Beautifully stated, Karen.  Thank you for this, a timely reminder to start calling people and say "hey, I love you!"

Tracey
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13 posted 2001-12-24 11:49 AM


Yes, these are the other three little words that carry so much meaning. Lovely Karen, you touched my heart with this one, for I feel this too. Best wishes for the season to you and your daughter. I hope 2002 is wonderful for you

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

CondorSey
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14 posted 2001-12-24 12:14 PM


Thanx for expressing what I have felt the last week while I miss my love.

Let's put the FUN back into Dysfunctional.

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15 posted 2001-12-24 09:36 PM


Enjoyed this!

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
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16 posted 2001-12-24 09:39 PM


No one likes to be without one who they love so dearly.  Hopefully they will be with you soon to enjoy great memories together.  Have a merry Christmas Karen!

     Randy Meador

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