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Open Poetry #17

Sunday Morning Early

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-12-23 07:56 AM

Sunday Morning Early

early Sunday morning
sitting here in the cold
do I climb back in bed with you
do I get so bold
slip again between the sheets
to where it all begins
feeling your warm breath
on the hunger of my skin
shall I quietly lay with you
embroidered in your seams
or slowly shall I stir you
from the embraces of your dreams
for now I shall let you slumber
tucked in the warmth of my arms
later when you awake
I shall melt within your charms

"I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow)

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-12-23 08:00 AM

Helen,
That melted the butter on my toast. A lovely, lovely write. Sy

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

2 posted 2001-12-23 10:45 AM

Makes me wanna go back to bed....very nice!

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2001-12-23 11:14 AM

some cozy poem you've got there, nice and serene.

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

4 posted 2001-12-24 12:40 PM

h,
"shall I quietly lay with you
embroidered in your seams
or slowly shall I stir you
from the embraces of your dreams"

Love this!
Love the whole thing. Mellow in its romance and sensitivity. Well done!
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