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Blankets Of Her (for the man who loves the snow)

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1slick_lady
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Blankets Of Her    (for the man who loves the snow)

she entices him as she falls
he can not wait, he heeds her call
he lingers in her blankets of beauty
where noise stops and is off duty
he finds warmth within her frost
safely in her dusting he gets so lost
the silence in her whitened seas
no one around he is so pleased
only he and she upon this trail
in this quiet, he loves her every detail
soothing comfort in her arms he feels
wrapped in her layers of quiet and still

"I have already paid for all my future sins."  Sade...(King of Sorrow)

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-23-2001 01:05 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

I love this! Yes, the quiet the snow brings is so soothing....it feels like the world outside your yard has just dissappeared.....
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Snow is so beautiful how it caresses the landscape...but so cold...James
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(smiles) Oh my gosh, I love the snow; I especially love the touch of snowflakes on your tongue and the peace and calm and silk-like softness. (sigh) Sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I dream of feeling the snowflakes kiss me and my dream girl Joanna's skin as we hug each other close. (kiss on cheek) Soooooo beautiful, I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (12-23-2001 03:54 PM).]

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Lovely Helen, and the freshly fallen snow does look and feel like a blanket.
~hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

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as one who loves the snow. . . I thank you. . .

this is exactly how it is. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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h,
Soothing, as your style so often is.
And insightful, coming from a lady standing in the surf.  You have captured well, this blissful ephemeron.  
I couldn't do as well with a walk on the beach as you have done here.
Thank you, from all of us who welcome, quietly, being snowed on.
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I wish I were more eloquent and developed as a writer to properly comment on your piece.  The best I can say is, I enjoyed it.  It raised up some past and current fond memories in me.

Let's put the FUN back into Dysfunctional.

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'tis the season
to remember . . .

and to be remembered
 
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