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The road Less Travelled - Twenty or less
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The road Less Travelled - Twenty or less |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Crystalline tears Rain on the pages of regret Within the virgin paths That hold my life Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown [This message has been edited by Kethry (12-24-2001 04:57 AM).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
perfect...absolutely perfect  Kathleen (Kay) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This had a very "silver" feeling...I don't know why, that is just how I perceived it... thank you! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Keth darling sister of my soul I am struck dumb. Mmmmm mmmmm mmmm Roughly translated that reads this is soooooooooooo awesome. And don't think I can do it because I cannot. How could i hope to distil my own verbosity down to 20 words? You know I can talk for England. and possibly the rest of the world too. Love and warm stuff As always Slushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now. . . this is why I enjoy your work so much. . . you make it shimmer and shine like that "silver" that Sunshine spoke of. . . well done my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh my, this touches...... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes Kethry...this touches deeply...good one! *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
to everyone, thanks this was an expirement...I'm glad it turned out well. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh just so excellent, Keth... So beautiful and smooth and fresh! and........20 or less. Great job!   copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing Kethry...hope you have a Merry Christmas that you will never regret...James |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Keth - Absolutely beautiful. Dave |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Kethry - you write twenty or under very well. This is excellent... BC |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Here here! yes the mother of invention has visited you and brought you good tidings  . It's the quality that always counts, Bravo!! |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Kethry, you've done this form an elegant justice. Very nicely written. -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Well done Kethry, now about those virgin paths...maybe it is time that you took one? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
well-worded, short and intense...i hope you would find happiness on your virgin paths... |
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