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Come Out and Play
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Come Out and Play |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Come Out and Play There were many days when my desire to come and visit you on Maui seemed only a remote possibility to me. Seriously Jackie when you walked away you ruined my day, my week, my month, my heart. Perhaps one year has passed, who knows, and now you call me like we've never been apart. And in some strange way you're missing me saying I was so understanding of your problems and stood by you through all adversity. So what's the deal Jackie? Are you asking me to come out and play and after my heart grows close to you will you once again toss me away? JamesLee December22 2001 |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh James, this is so very sad, my heart goes out to you for having to experience such a heartwrenching backfire! (sad sigh) I pray Jackie can have the heart to forgive you and never again hurt you like this! (big hugggsssss) Our hearts are with you, sweet friend, you deserve the greatest happiness of all! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
James - Sounds like a very tough and painful situation. Trusting someone again who broke your heart is never easy. Hopefully, she won't do the same thing again. Hey, maybe you can do it to her.lol Dave |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
I would ask what's the deal too, could it be that she didn't 'know what she lost, until it was gone',like in Joni Mitchell's song?Nicely crafted.  there are lots of fish in the ocean they say people grow up and older and move their own way.. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh no no, the game must end somewhere James! I'd be hesitant to get close to her again! If your heart tells you to trust her once again then follow your heart. (Hugs) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
go get her, James! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Tread cautiously, James...sometimes they don't want us - they just don't want us to get away....just in case  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
JM....I HATE IT ...when someone leads you along....and then....you know.....HOPE this works...good expression of feelings.. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh James do be careful....your heart is tender yet...do not let it get walked on...you deserve much better than that. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Gee James, don't know what to tell ya about this one... seems a bit confusing and I can see how you would be a little hesitant as to what to do.  Good write....hugs, Nancy. *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James, magnificent work especially this line Perhaps one year has passed, who knows, So sad and captivating. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
James~ I'd agree with all the advice on the board.....always remember to follow your heart.....best of luck, tread lightly.... lauren~ Tomorrow's another day |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
"love hurts when only ones in love..."  -rick springfieldthis is a situation indeed... *sigh*...we all want what we cant have...if you are unavailable, she wants you.. but the question is, what do YOU want? to love and be loved--or to be used?...can you be a friend without wanting more? lots of thought must go into your going out to play... good luck to you.. hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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