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Getting Goofy
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Getting Goofy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“GETTING GOOFY” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Getting a little goofy I am, not quite sure I know why, Could it be something extra, you put in the apple pie.... It did taste especially good, not like it was bad, or nuttin… But I is getting a little goofy, it has to be,’ hic’, because of sumtin.... Maybe the rum, I saw you with, and you poured in a little bit… A’hh, you thought I wasn’t looking, wonder if you’re trying, to get me lit… Wow, I’m getting a little dizzy, what was in that pie, I wonder... And I forgot we were all alone, where’s that bed, I ponder… hic… ~~~~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Oh Bill, you have such a wonderful sense of humor, I too know how the holidays can affect us! (smiles) Such a delicious keeper, sweet friend, your talent always amaze me! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Bill I loved this fun piece of writing, much enjoyed. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill...this was a lighter side of you that was an enjoyable read...they are all that, but this one is fun.... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Bill, You goofy guy, you! Fun write.  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill, You know I love your romantic side.....but it is good to see the goofy side too  I enjoyed this Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, now this is a good feeling though right? Kathleen (Kay) |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
That's what I get when I drink Port Hope you found your bed in time And your head feels like wood in the morning, doesn't it LOL Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
oh shucks, you saw me pouring in the rum LOL! j/k This is such a cute poem Bill, you cracked me up with this stanza.. "Maybe the rum, I saw you with, and you poured in a little bit… A’hh, you thought I wasn’t looking, wonder if you’re trying, to get me lit…" Loved this sweety |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling wickedly* I hear rum and oysters are one powerful combination....  want to share and find out. LOL...I love your goofy side, Bill. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
hmmmmmmm. . . I get the same feeling when I drink Long Island Iced Teas BC. . . ah yes. . . the "funny side" of Bill Charles. . . I like it. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
nice write Bill, enjoy the drink and the pies! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Darn Bill, I thought you meant you were getting Goofy (the Disney one) for real and I was expecting an anvil chorus instead you give me wine and roses...I'm disappointed. *just kidding* This was so sweet. If you need some help getting into bed... Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Bill! Love this side of you! Want me to tuck you in? Huh? ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy, I like it, this lighter fun side of you, it suits you dear boy. Mmmmm smiles suit you love and this is an excellent piece from you, as I've mentioned before you are improving almost hourly. Do I love this, is my favourite color pink? Mmmmmm then yes I love it I thoroughly enjoyed the read, it made me laugh and with all the tears certain people have been sending my way, I mention no names, why not, yes I will, Keth, I do mean you I need a good laugh. this gave me a good giggle.   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
All righty - This is the poetry police... I'm takin' you in for a TUI... Typing Under the Influence... of apple pie!!.. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh Bill this one is really cute. ....like it a lot Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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