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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-22 09:21 AM


I cling to the net as I cast out for love.
Sifting the waters of my empty mind.
Praying for help from up high above.
For in this net...alas...nothing I find.

There is a hole in my simple snare
brought forward from my very depth
Keeps me from ever catching there
and to this mine two eyes have wept.

When you are powerless to the rift
that causes you not to constrain.
Just turn to that which is a true gift
as hearts speak and no longer refrain.

Is the words of a tender heart said
not in vain as they are spoke true.
Mine love words shall all be read
‘cause my heart and soul are you.

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2001-12-22 09:40 AM


Beautiful sentiments from the heart Magnus, just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2001-12-22 09:46 AM



Magnus, may your seas always be calm when you are out casting, and may you always return with treasures, troved...

wonderful!

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3 posted 2001-12-22 03:47 PM




(sigh) Sooooooooo beautifully tranquil your emotions are in this soft poem, sweet friend! (big hugggsssss) May you forever have clear sailing on the sea of your heart and find the most beautiful love deep down! (sigh) Beautiful, sweet friend, just beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

:-)

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-12-22 06:09 PM


well, I said the last one was one of your best, ok this is!!!

Kathleen (Kay)
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5 posted 2001-12-22 06:21 PM


I could almost hear Leonard Nimoy reciting this...
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6 posted 2001-12-22 07:08 PM


Perfect Barry....just perfect!

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

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7 posted 2001-12-22 09:25 PM


*sigh* such tender words from your heart and pen always make me sigh with the pleasure of reading them. Well done.**hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Kethry
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8 posted 2001-12-23 07:48 AM


Magnus,
I could feel the pull of the ocean in this write. Excellent.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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9 posted 2001-12-23 08:13 AM


Magnus,
A very nice write, enjoyed.

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