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Startime
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0 posted 2001-12-21 08:04 PM


I Would If I Could

I would if I could
touch your eyes
with soft lips
kissing them
closed

I would if I could
touch your lips
with finger tips
tracing them
gently

I would if I could
touch your heart
with softness
given from
my heart

I would if I could
touch your soul
with sweetness
from spirit
freely

I would if I could
touch you now
with passion
heat wrapped
flowing

Karen Torbiak©



Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

© Copyright 2001 Karen Torbiak - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-12-21 08:12 PM


StarTime~
Oh ... what a lovely, lovely write~
Delicately seductive~
I'm liking it VERY, VERY much~

You write the heart soooooo well, sweet poetess~
Happy Holidays to you, sweet lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                   

strbbux
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2 posted 2001-12-21 08:22 PM


Very nice star, very intimate and sweet, strbbux
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2001-12-21 08:25 PM


Karen - would if I could too...

BC

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4 posted 2001-12-21 08:32 PM


Wow Karen...a lot of woulds and a few coulds..  

If I could get my chores done...I would
be writing poetry right now...

If I could get the bills paid....I would
take a long break...

I wish my would/could list was like yours..
Yours sounds like it is a lot more fun
and romantic...

Enjoyed this...

Balladeer
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5 posted 2001-12-21 08:44 PM


Well, they eyes and lips are a little tough but you have no problem touching the heart and soul with your beautiful words, lady
catalinamoon
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6 posted 2001-12-21 08:49 PM


You said it,and I would do the same.
Beautiful..
Sandra

Startime
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7 posted 2001-12-21 09:50 PM


Marge....**big hugs** from such a talent as you that is the greatest compliment. Thank you, so much, dear one.

strbbux...Thank you, I am so glad you could feel so much from this poem. **hugs**

Bill...*sigh* yes....we understand and share these words and feelings. **big hugs**

Magnus....I am glad, my friend, that you liked it.....*grin* I am trying to stay away from the oysters but mmmmmmm they are sooooo good. **hugs**

Balladeer.....thank you so much, sweet man. **big hugs**

Sandra...*grin* now all we have to do is find us a man that we can say these things too. Keep looking, girl, he will come out of the blue to capture your heart. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Madame Chipmunk
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8 posted 2001-12-21 10:26 PM


Karen....an absolutely beautiful poem both in words and in form.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2001-12-21 10:49 PM


All that lovin' and no kisses on the lips?  James
Irish Rose
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10 posted 2001-12-21 10:53 PM


This is lovely, Karen,

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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