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Michael G
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since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-12-21 03:50 PM


I settled upon the laughing grass
that focused my attention away
my sight unseeing all along
could not believe the angels song.
I winced at the pain they made
inside my mind was begining
to stare at the colors of the wind
to follow the languished tides again.
I heard the laughter in the air
but the ground seemed to keep me here
understanding I am all but lost
I felt the urgency to get up and walk.

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-12-21 07:45 PM


inside my mind was begining
to stare at the colors of the wind
to follow the languished tides again.
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hey there quiet one...this is a bittersweet beauty...
Merry Christmas to you and those 2 angels of yours sweet poet of the wind.
peace and poetry
jm

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.


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