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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-12-21 07:55 AM


Pine Needles

Pine needles swept into a pile
Are adept to incite a wile.
And clouds do actors of engage
To open up a seeming stage

There, colors stir the atmosphere
With hues and shades and veils of steer.
That makes the figures of my dream
Come to life in a carefree seem.

Sometimes there’re knights on holy quests
Others, just scenery at best
Today they sail a sea of blue
Billowing sails of green in view.

And sea gulls add a touch of real
To make a vision of surreal
And now my mind has caught the guile
A super nova dreamer’s wile

It’s here I walk a rainbows bend
Tranquil to a fantasies end






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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-12-21 07:58 AM



Ah, finally.  I've been sitting here waiting for my morning gift to arrive, and there it is, in full fledged form of familial delight, for my family is not complete unless Sy gives me my good morning...

and I so enjoyed...

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-12-21 08:12 AM


There, colors stir the atmosphere
With hues and shades and veils of steer.
That makes the figures of my dream
Come to life in a carefree seem.

Sometimes there’re knights on holy quests
Others, just scenery at best
Today they sail a sea of blue
Billowing sails of green in view.

And sea gulls add a touch of real
To make a vision of surreal
And now my mind has caught the guile
A super nova dreamer’s wile

It’s here I walk a rainbows bend
Tranquil to a fantasies end
===================================

and by the gift of your gifted pen...we walk with you...and tis a lovely view from your minds eye.
May I join you again tomorrow?
Where shall we walk? Eden, Shangi-La, your beaches of understand? Paris for tea *L*
Be there or be square me Stinkylove LOL
Wondrous poem of color and vision Sy-babers
me

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.


Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-12-21 08:17 AM



...and the cream in my coffee is JM's response...LOL...

SmartChick
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4 posted 2001-12-21 08:20 AM


Very nice, Sy. I like this.
Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2001-12-21 08:45 AM


Good morning my sunshine. *L*

JM,
Anywhere, anytime, would be just fine.
Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky

Sunshine,
You are a delight. *L*

SmartChick,
Thank you sweet. *L*

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