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Yogi
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0 posted 2001-12-20 10:08 PM


At night, silent
I stand in your room
In the corner where shadows fade
And darkness is soundless
I watch you breathing in the stillness of the night’s frozen air
Each breath you intake sustains life in you


I stare at your outstanding beauty
Wanting to reach out and caress your face
My heart beats faster but I hear not a thing
I see into your mind's eye
Visions of me as you dream in the tranquillity of this dark place


A sound echo’s for your sweet lips
I hear you call my name
Across the still air your voice travels to me
And the kind words you say of me
I just close my eyes and let your words cross the threshold
Into my heart and soul to live forever


So as day breaks and the light creeps into the darkness
The shadows return and I leave this lightened room
As I go I watch you stir from your deep and peaceful sleep
I say I love you and fade into the freedom of space
As you waken to a new beautiful dawning day
Yogi "Poem For My Angel"


© Copyright 2001 Yogi - All Rights Reserved
Zukene_Chic
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Cali
1 posted 2001-12-20 10:21 PM


That was beuatiful, and made me feel.... some word or another. wow...
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2 posted 2001-12-20 10:25 PM



So many poets will treasure this one, Yogi. Thank you for sharing.

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3 posted 2001-12-20 10:40 PM


ooooh this is an incredible poem Yogi! There is nothing like watching your sweetheart sleep soundly!

RP

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4 posted 2001-12-20 11:54 PM




(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, your love will cherish this beautiful declaration of love from your heart forever! (kiss on cheek) So breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it!!! May true love forever glow in your golden heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Yogi, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-12-21 10:18 AM


Wow!  I love the silence..so many things discovered in it!  Your expression of beauty to the one you love makes the silence soft and romantic...great job!

VR

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