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Sunken Love
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Sunken Love |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Men and women stepping hastily in and out of love quick romance calls, there's no wearing gloves; always one will feel the need for a brief moment while the other seeks it's speed, should there be undo torment. What a way to sink a love were it not for flights above; as angels keep watch over the sunken romance there is always one to haul you back, out of the trance. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Interesting write, ecrivan! Enjoyed. |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Very interesting way to look at love. But one that is often true. Many people step in and out of love so easily, some wanting it so much and giving all of themselves to it, while others just like the idea and the feeling of being in love. Thanks for the read  .~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ [This message has been edited by DarkAngelChelle (12-20-2001 08:44 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I really liked this one, Martin... Some people really just like being in love for loves sake.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (12-20-2001 11:54 PM).] |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Martin - Well done. I liked the ending. Though there are people falling in and out of love so easily, there is hope that we can bounce back and find true love in the end. Dave |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Yes indeed, love can indeed be something to fall out of, and it too feels like trust sinking and is lost forever, but there is always one true love that will keep your spirit afloat and spread your wings to cheer! (big hugggsssssss) Such an interesting write, dearest friend, you always have a wonderful way of expressing yourself! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Dave, Nice to see you on board. Lyra, this is way after all those love poems we've come across you know where, most of which I noticed were based on upsets within the couple... Noah, I write much like a soothsayer...modern style there is usually great depth to my writes. Dark Angel, Duncan There will be more to say..stay tuned..and I hope to read yours. |
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