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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-12-20 05:39 PM

Finger Painting

If I could
draw your heart
would I know how
to blend your colours

would my hands
touch just enough
reds and blues to
paint your passion

would I be in possession
of the selflessness
to create space for the
journey of others?

If I could
draw your heart
would you feel
the tracing of
my fingertips

would you recognize
the warmth

would you know
the inscription
of my initials
in the lower right corner?

12-21-01

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

[This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (12-20-2001 05:43 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-20 05:43 PM

(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Annie, I believe we all have these feelings when wondering if love is real or not! (sigh) May the true love of your life forever touch your heart and leave happy imprints of eternity of eternal love! (sigh) Your loving words always sign the initials of beauty! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2001-12-20 05:45 PM

Hi Annie...must be the season for loving thoughts ha..nicely done hon hugss

~Victoria~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-12-20 09:07 PM

AWhispersCaress~
Beautifully done~
So delicately portrayed~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

4 posted 2001-12-20 09:27 PM

Annie,

I really like this.. alot. Thank you for sharing.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

5 posted 2001-12-21 12:27 PM

Whispers Caress - Beautifully done. I really liked this stanza:

"would I be in possession
of the selflessness
to create space for the
journey of others?"

Very good.

Dave

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

6 posted 2001-12-21 01:25 AM

That was amazing. Not even that describes how beuatifuly written your poem is.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

7 posted 2001-12-22 12:34 PM

A Whisper's Caress-
   This is such a soft and tender write.
   Just lovely.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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