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Just Listening |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“JUST LISTENING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ What I do tonight is listen, to the melody, a guitar plays, touching into my soul… It’s hard to explain, how it affects me, when my body moves, to rhythmic control… I hold you tighter this night, but gently, my fingers to your hips, and we play… I gaze into sensuous eyes, and melt, hear your whispered words, as we sway… Your warmth breath, I’ve know before, but now different somehow, on my skin… Don’t know what it is, the music perhaps, into the night with you, places we’ve been… Wanting no other, or another to hold, I touch your warm lips, with aching… Many notes heard, of that haunting guitar, my eyes close, touching you, just listening… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (12-20-2001 08:39 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such a haunting but lovely tune fills your romantic words! (smiles) May true love forever shine in your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* oh I love the image within, soft and tender piece.....just love it! ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Bill,  I like this. I'm glad I stopped in to read.Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill, this is softly sensual and oh so romantic! I love it! ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely words bill...as always...romantic... ~Victoria~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And the song plays on...nicely done Bill C. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
I love guitar music, and this poem was so sweet, very romantic, soft, I loved it, strbbux |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill my dear friend I swear this is sooooooooo good I can hear the music myself, A nice little smokey blues number, care to dance? I really love this one kid You've done an excellent job as always As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You play sweet music from your heart touching the soul deeply Sensual passion is your art singing to us sweetly Bill, the romance of your words tells the beauty of the feelings you have. This poem is magnificent.....You could even melt the heart of a star.  Don't mind me...I am just in a silly mood. **hugs**Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ 'What I do tonight is listen, to the melody, a guitar plays, touching into my soul…' You've strummed a chord or two in my heart with this one~ BEAUTIFUL~ Happy Holidays to you, my friend~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Sometimes it's wonderful just to stand there, and listen, and ... be. Or be together with that special someone . This was wonderfully romantic. It's beautiful the way things so familiar can become fresh and new again. ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - my friend, I again thank you for your warm reply... Charisma - close your eyes, dream, and you will hear that soft guitar... rosepetals25 - and I'm glad that you stopped in for a read also... Enchantress - it's romance I love, a little sensual dosn't hurt either.... A Merry Christmas to you... Victoria - the words within me just seem to flow with romance... Magnus - and the song does play on, and I can hear that haunting guitar... strbbux - haven't had the acquaintance, but I welcome you. I play the guitar some, and love it. Even wrote a few songs. Thanks for the kind words of your reply... Marsha - hi Mushy, my dear friend. Even 6,000 miles away it plays a melody. Maybe a smoky blues would be nice, I'll work on it... Love to dance with you... Startime - I blush with your kindness, and say thank you from this warm heart. I also get into them silly moods, hehehe.... Marge - I'm very pleased that I could touch your heart with these words. Thank you... And Happys Holidays to you, my friend... DarkAngelChelle - it is most wonderful at times to just stand there and listen.. And to be together with someone special.. I thank you for your words... |
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