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walker
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0 posted 2001-12-20 03:04 PM



In the night
I found refuge in
your arms
No questions asked
just love me
and I'll love you back
I don't care where
you've been or
to whom you gave my kiss
just hold me tonight
and I'll be your guiding light
if only for a night

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2001-12-20 03:19 PM


No questions asked
just love me
and I'll love you back

Know the feeling well.  Good one, walker.  Perhaps, a sequel...the morning after?

[This message has been edited by Duncan (12-20-2001 03:21 PM).]

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2 posted 2001-12-20 03:22 PM




(sigh) Sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, you alwyays write love so well! (smiles) May you forever feel happy and safe in his arms ever after! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are sooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-20 04:56 PM


Yes, walker, I understand this very well.  Good work.  This one made me think.  I like writing that does that.

Michael

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There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

rosepetals25
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4 posted 2001-12-20 11:18 PM


walker,

     Ohhhhhh I like this. I like the same section that Duncan pointed out.  It seems like it should be that simple.. love me and I'll love  you back.... but some how things are never that easy. Great write.

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (12-20-2001 11:19 PM).]

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5 posted 2001-12-21 05:46 PM


A very warm unconditional request...Nicely
said Walker...

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