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Soleil Noir
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Observation

pink lips
slip
words through
ivory posts ~

whispered
thoughts
go
unheard ~

she is
pursuing,
perusing
a view,
with sighs ~

would you
look
at
him



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Opeth
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1 posted 12-20-2001 10:42 AM       View Profile for Opeth   Email Opeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Opeth

I am not sure that I understood your poem, but I found it to be quite intriguing.
Seymour Tabin
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Soleil Noir,
An interesting write, enjoyed
Janet Marie
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pink lips
slip
words through
ivory posts ~
====================
she is
pursuing,
perusing
a view,
with sighs ~
=======================

only a poet could come up with those lines...
very cool image in that first verse...and word play in the 3rd...
very cool writing, I enjoyed this unique, clever poem of perspective.
well done
jm
jm

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.

Glenn Logan
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Wonderfully subtle - oriental in feel -I love it!


Glenn Logan
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SoleilNoir~
Hmmmm ... something so familiar about your style~
Have we met in another life ?

I like this very much~

Happy Holidays to you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Great poem. I likes it a LOT!
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Deep in the heart


7 posted 01-07-2002 04:35 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

hey look me over
I would taste your lips so pink
and hear your whispers

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Severn
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8 posted 04-02-2002 06:42 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Glad I stumbled my way across this..

K
 
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