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. . . Now I sleep alone
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. . . Now I sleep alone |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is a duet with an anonymous friend. ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ now I sleep alone come fill this cold empty space let us share our lives ~*~ destined dreamers find peace in their searching of mind entangle my life ~*~ destined dreamers merge warmth and peace now fill that space entangled with love ~*~ two walking as one soul, breath, heartrending kindness find me in your dream ~*~ two dreamers awake dreams become reality eternity waits ~*~ can it be this real where life is but dream come true finding love with one ~*~ our reality dream’s fruition is living love lives for we two ~*~ Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (12-21-2001 10:51 AM).] |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Whether by way of anonymous or muse, I would say that you both have a talent for this style of poetry... thank you for sharing! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh this is so romantic...it sings of love! Now...if I can just figure out who your muse/friend is, hummmm.  Beautifully penned, hugs, Nancy. *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper, A good write, enjoyed the read. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
check your spelling of the term "entangled." "destined dreamers find peace in their searching of mind entangle my life" To have one's life entangled is usually a bad thing, so I especially enjoyed the way you used the phrase as a positive. Well done. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
two walking as one soul, breath, heartrending kindness find me in your dream Enjoyed them all but this is my favorite. Thanks, Interloper. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
So beautiful and romantic. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A lovely melody, harmony of two blending into One. Such gentle fowing love poetry.  |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very romantic and a nice flow, you work well together, nice read. strbbux |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (sigh) You always write such romantic love poetry, may you forever dream beside your love in bliss! (big hugggggssss) Soooo dreamy and beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Sounds ike someones dreams may become reality. How wonderful. And put to such a beautiful poetic form. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ Just a perfect blend of thought~ Happy Holidays to you, my friend~ AND Thanks ...~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Now you sleep alone with only dreams to hold you make reality Absolutely beautiful...such a yearning feeling in this joint poem. Very powerful. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
separate thoughts wind bringing two to candy-cane peppermint thinking |
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