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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2001-12-20 12:53 PM


Drifting out upon the sea,
in the silence of her deep,
shines a light from off the coast
a beacon that alternates and maps a course.

Uncertain in her surroundings
she had lost her way before,
charting familiar waters
her turmoil comes in waves.

The sound of the sea ebbs and flows,
changing with the tides.
Suspended beneath the clouds
dancing upon the wind.

Moving slowly out and faraway,
stars reflect in knowing eyes.
Hands that cannot touch
nor reach across the oceans.

In a rush to hush and calm the storm,
turbulent and tormenting in her depths.
An undertow pulls her down,
quiet in the silence of her deep.

It is the light that shines,
musical movements that come in waves
weathering every storm.

The sea has never failed in all her majesty,
stirring in her misery
her personal quest to persevere.

As her calm returns
mysterious and peaceful
content within her own elements,
that which she cannot change.

Shimmers in the darkness
casting shadows,
in the silence of her deep.




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SEA
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1 posted 2001-12-20 01:05 AM


"The sea has never failed in all her majesty,
stirring in her misery
her personal quest to persevere.

As her calm returns
mysterious and peaceful
content within her own elements,
that which she cannot change.

Shimmers in the darkness
casting shadows,
in the silence of her deep."


ok, most of the poem I know but I love this part!! I am so keeping this poem Fantastic!!

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
2 posted 2001-12-20 01:15 AM


You are so nice to say so, and I'm so glad you are 'so keeping this.'  I am so the ~sea~ except when I come here,  since you got here first.  : )  
Thank you so much ~SEA~


Sudhir Iyer
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3 posted 2001-12-20 04:34 AM


a wonderful write...

regards,
sudhir

catalinamoon
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4 posted 2001-12-20 10:15 PM


That is such an incredible line "In the silence of her deep"
This poem says so much.
Sandra

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2001-12-20 10:52 PM


BluesSerenade - a most beautifully written serenade of her deep...

BC

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6 posted 2001-12-20 10:56 PM


Oh my!  This poem loves me!! Yes it does!
Thank you for this one!
*Happy Holidays*
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

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7 posted 2001-12-20 11:17 PM




(smiles) This poem loves me too, just as I love your words! (sigh) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such peace and relaxation fills these words, it soothed me! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true classic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



Mya love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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