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SEA
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0 posted 2001-12-19 09:16 PM



Pen paths 'pon parchment
ponderings plain
pulling, poking, proding
problems, pain
persuing perchance
penance pleasing poet.....


~SEA~

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1 posted 2001-12-19 09:19 PM


Sea,
I like it. *L*

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2 posted 2001-12-19 09:24 PM


SEA - indeed very playful. My tonguage is flustad like a penit booter sammich... hehehe....

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3 posted 2001-12-19 09:33 PM


Sue~Playful?  Perhaps....
What is Bill trying to say? LOL.
Hugs, Nancy.

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

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4 posted 2001-12-19 09:49 PM




(smiles) Oooooohhhhhh, now you have my tongue twisted up, this is so clever and inventive, I love it!!! (smiles) I believe Bill asked for a peanut butter sandwich! (giggles) Soooooo cute, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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5 posted 2001-12-19 09:56 PM


Seymour, thank you

BC, whoa?! LOL

Nancy, I'm still thinking he wants something I can't repeat LOL

Noah, hey you! thank you dear one

~SEA

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6 posted 2001-12-19 10:07 PM


Bill- did you say your tongue is flustered like a peanut butter sandwich?

Great poem SEA.  Sometimes those words just drive you crazy when they flow through the head and they all start with the same letter!!!  You have to just write 'em down...yours, unlike mine make sense!

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7 posted 2001-12-19 10:12 PM


AAAAAHHHHH!!!  All these p's get me tongue twisted!!!  However, that is a good thing, I liked this very much.

     Randy Meador

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8 posted 2001-12-19 10:41 PM


Prose?? perhaps....alliterations?? absolutely

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9 posted 2001-12-19 10:49 PM


Positively pleasing ... practically perfect I'd say!  Loved this Susan!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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10 posted 2001-12-19 10:53 PM


SEA,
Please,post pretty poems per pleasure phrequently!

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11 posted 2001-12-19 11:40 PM


Circe darling girl I love it, Sometimes you positively astound me this was one of the times.

Practically perfect poet paints poetically perfect pictures.

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy


To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1


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12 posted 2001-12-20 01:51 AM


heeheehee, thank you all very much. Sorry about the tongue twisting I had this happen to me the other night, wrote it down as quick as I could LOL  again, thank you
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