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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-12-19 07:35 PM

I get tangled
in my own web
I think I know
much about love
having experience it's glory
having suffered it's defeat
having survived it's downfall
so I come out with my shield
smiling
feeling in control
not knowing that
love it's patiently waiting
for me to fall

Carol Luna
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 55

1 posted 2001-12-19 07:40 PM

The important thing is that you got out!

Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-12-19 08:33 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Soooooo beautifully expressed, sweet friend! May you untangle yourself from that web and fall into the arms of the most beautiful love forever with comfort and joy! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet Walker! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-12-19 08:50 PM

And wait patiently it will...until you are ready, again. Really like this one, walker.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-12-19 08:52 PM

Love does tend to wait....but does that fall have to be so hard?!

I like this

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2001-12-19 09:29 PM

walker - seems at times like a merry-go-round, at least it seems like it to me at times... Great writing and thoughts...

BC

thepoeticplumber
Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 185

6 posted 2001-12-19 10:01 PM

Loved the ending. Love waits for us to fall.
In love that is. Great!! Roger

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

7 posted 2001-12-19 10:03 PM

Great poem...but I avoid that fall at all costs!!!

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2001-12-20 02:09 PM

True love is always patient.

Nice work, walker.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

9 posted 2001-12-20 02:11 PM

After finishing reading this, the first thing that came to my mind was this...

"Well put."

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