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Nothing Now Suffice (for a special friend)
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Nothing Now Suffice (for a special friend) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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If there were but one drop of dew in rainbow field of sparkling hue, on hands and knees, beyond Pride's yield-- Know you, now--I would find you. I do not care for wishes, grant... However, sweet, is sweet romance... Bodies--all, they pass away. Forever--I have felt this way. You remain connecting piece to puzzle of eternity. My heart is but a sacrifice; and if I could, I'd offer twice-- "Receive this blade," the virgin prayed, "for nothing else, will now suffice..." * * * (still another repost, but this one is a solstice present for a friend, so forgive me, forum?) and pssst....to my friend... "Virgins? VIRGINS? We don't need no stinkin' virgins!" ROFLMAO....they are highly over-rated anyhow!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is truly beautiful, a stunning gift for your friend! Well done! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Such a wonderful gift for your sweet friend, dearest Karen! (smiles) You always write the most wonderful expressions from your heart, you are a delight to us all! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I was really enjoying this, and then you throw in the virgin rant. Ha, ha. This is good. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Like it much, Happy Solstice Sandra |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Love it Karen...  God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
LOL! This is excellent, Karen! *hugs*Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I have noticed that you have an original style, one that is all your own, at least from my perspective, that is. And I may say that I am impressed with your style of poetry. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Serenity I love this one it's a wonderful gift for a friend. Absolutely excellent Outstanding writing as and this is just perfect    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If there were but one drop of dew in rainbow field of sparkling hue, on hands and knees, beyond Pride's yield-- Know you, now--I would find you. ======================================= Im smiling at you me twin... are ya doing your moonglow candle dance  You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice Karen.....Happy Solstice! ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
However, sweet, is sweet romance... Bodies--all, they pass away. Forever--I have felt this way. You remain connecting piece to puzzle of eternity." What a beautiful thing to say to another...this is lovely Karen! Hugs, ~Krista Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself. Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too [This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (12-20-2001 11:08 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Kay, I thank you, as always for your kindness. Yer a doll! Noah...sweet of you! smiling. Thank you my friend! mm? was I RANTING? LOL...I'd say it were a case of sour grapes, but it is difficult for me to remember!  Thank you! (oops, that read bad! FOR THE RECORD: I am NOT thanking mirror man for the loss of my virginity! LOL)Sandra...thank you for the good wishes and reply! It's going nicely by the way. (Solstice is actually a threeday thing for me! I'll have to explain that one to you some time!) Love to you, lovely lady! Elizabeth, it always pleases me to know that you've read and enjoyed. I thank you, gratefully. Michael? Are you sure you enjoyed the poem, or just the IDEA of virgin sacrifice? LOL back atchya! hugs. Opeth...I thank you for reading. I like "original"--grinning here---so much more positive than "weird"! Thanks again! and wow to Marsha...thanks for popping in! You've my humble gratitude... and my own twin JM---yes, it's that time of year again--making wishes, taking self inventory and redefining goals...gotta watch the fire dances though, (the new house is deeper in the Burbs--AND it doesn't help that it was his dad's house...who happened to be a retired captain of the fire department!) It's okay tho, the boyfriend is understanding of my witchy habits, (read that as SCARED)--lol--SO...he bought me an outdoor fireplace so I don't get arrested...gotta keep the clothes on too...at least outdoors, he said! *wink* Love to you girlie, and love to the forum... Sleepy Goddess tonight! |
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