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Touch Me
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Touch Me |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Touch Me Your fingertips flow swiftly and tenderly over cheekbones and nose, then across my smile without beguile, for it’s in movement that you feel me, round the chin of determination, down to shoulders of strength and resolve, across mountains of love to the valley below. For touch is where we shall meet One-on-One in Love so sweet it will tingle your feet, and curl your toes as the scent of Love excites your nose. And we shall be as One, in love's sweet touch. |
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Dusty Rhodes Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 27 |
A wonderful poem and a smiling play on words, very well done, indeed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dusty, thank you. Glad you enjoyed the word flow. James, thank you. It's good to have you visit. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Now this is a wonderful touch. It isn't often that someone touches us like this, but it certainly is wonderful when they do. As one in loves touch...a magical number indeed. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"round the chin of determination, down to shoulders of strength and resolve," I loved the visual aspects you captured in this piece Midnitesun ... wonderful phrasing indeed.  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Midnitesun,, Well this poem touched me in places I haven't been touched for a long time...the shoulders of resolve for one. Breathtaking poem. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Kacy, this is sooooooo romantic, your heart spreads wings over majestic mountains and fields of love! (sigh) May true love forever touch your heart and bring you great happiness always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Tracey, thanks. Touching can convey so much, and the best is a lover's touch. This is a just a dream for me right now. Kit, thanks! I needed to remind myself to hold onto my dream. Kethry, Thank you for your comment. That line makes me sit up straighter and keep looking forward. Noah, it's true, my heart is carried by wings of love. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Kacy:      -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
gentleness in your words.... very well done |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, I knew it! I knew you were touched!! But nobody told me you were touched like that. Wow! That wasn't the deep valley of indecision, was it? LOL Okay, I concede. Very romantic. I just couldn't leave the title alone ya' know. Good to see that side of you too! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is nothing that speaks more clearly than the feel of a lovers touch. You wrote of them so beautifully Midnitesun. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Love's sweet touch is lovely... regards, sudhir |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Kacy, This is so lovingly written and sweet. It's pretty! *hugs* my friend. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
These words from your heart could melt the heart of Frosty himself. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Happy holidays to all! Mark, I take it you liked this. Thank you for your visit. SEA, thank you, your poetry always touches the heart. Larry, LOL, of course I am 'touched.' Aren't all who write poetry? Glad you enjoy this side of me as well. Blues Serenade, thank you for your sweet, touching reply. Sudhir, love's touch is the most lovely. Auguste, so happy you enjoyed this portrait. Opeth, Frosty is warming today as we speak. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This sounds so good..I want someone to have this with.. Beautiful write, Kacy Sandra |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Love so sweet it will tingle your feet, and curl your toes I loved this part. I have this thing about touching feet to feet when I'm sleeping. A little more than you probably needed to know, huh? lol |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sandra, me too! LOL, this is what I dream of every night lately, and hope will happen someday soon. *sigh* Duncan, LOL, yes, more than I needed to know, but I can enjoy a moment of intimacy vicariously. I am glad it tickled your reality toes. |
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