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Michael G
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0 posted 2001-12-18 10:29 PM


Lasting dreams in the after silence
that fills the void between night and day
wonders that you may hope to inherite
as you find you've laid to waste
Lasting dreams that fall on your anger
pass the wind that floats you here
as you stand in the center of nothing
you scream so you can dissapear
Lasting dreams that you once savored
like the melodies from the rain
collapse on you tear jerk ministries
the last attempt to set them free.

© Copyright 2001 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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1 posted 2001-12-18 10:35 PM


I like this, the dream through all the strife. There should always be dreams, we should never let them die. It is in trying to make our dreams come true, we grow, we learn, and if we're really lucky, they do come true.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Jenn E
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Kelowna, BC, Canada
2 posted 2001-12-18 11:30 PM


MG
How you express such complicatd but real feelings will never cease to amaze  me......You have an amazing talent for all that you do.......one never could forget.......which are why dreams are such  beautiful thing.........
As Always
Jenn E

Marina
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Pickering, Ontario
3 posted 2001-12-19 01:05 PM


If we cease to dream, we cease to exsist because sometimes dreams are all we have.

Love,
Me

It is a blessing to have wings for words and passion in pen.


Marina Crossley



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4 posted 2001-12-19 01:28 PM


                  ~ Lasting dreams that you once savored
                   like the melodies from the rain~

                          Lovely thought...enjoyed

                                  ~Victoria~


Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2001-12-19 02:49 PM




(sigh) Dreams are the most valuable things we could ever have, for without them, we have nothing to strive for, nothing to make us happy eevry time we think of them. (sigh) May we always never take our dreams for granted and love and cherish them forever! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, dearest Michael, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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