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Morning Kiss
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Morning Kiss |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada 
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Morning Kiss Angelic whispers softly spoken My heart pleasantly adrift Your gentle voice wakes me My eyes imagining you here I see your smile Your eyes gaze into mine A sweet kiss placed on my lips Your hair whisps in the breeze from the window Tickling my face ever so lightly My body heavy with desire My mind filled with dreams I embrace your image slowly Feeling your inner warmth surface Kissing you again my arms squeeze air Your physical no longer here Your smile instilled in my mind My eyes searching for remnants Of the morning kiss' ghost I feel you embrace me once more My lips still alive from the touch I lay still for a while Smiling at your love Willing to lose myself once more In your delicate Morning Kiss.  Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Terry, *sighs* Wouldn't you just like to stay in dreamland all day sometimes? A sweet poem about a lady lucky enough to be on your mind (is there something you're not telling me  ) Well done Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (12-18-2001 07:18 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh Terry, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it! (smiles) May she forever kiss your heart and bring joy to you every sunrise and sunset! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a timeless declaration of love! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Terry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...James |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Lovely poem. A morning kiss can put a smile on a face that lasts the whole day long. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Very romantic feelings expressed here. Dream-like quality floats off the screen. Nicely done. Cheryl |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Thank you all for your kind words! I havent been on much lately and I apologize, time seems to escape me. I wish you all the very merriest of holidays, forgive me if I am MIA over the season. Love and Peace to all... HUGS Ter. XOXOX Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautifully expressed. |
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strbbux Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859 |
Very very nice,, sweet and tender. strbbux |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Terry So many warm, romantic images you portrayed as you weaved your words of love...beautiful! Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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