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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-12-18 05:35 PM


I'll never be a rocket scientist
Or an astrologer with a starry view
And I don't need to hold a degree
To tell me how much love I have for you

I don't need a medal for bravery
And I may be dangerous with a clever brain
I just need to know you love me
For such a love would be my gain

Material things just don't matter
You can give them to people in need
All I need are your arms around me
For your love is all I need to feed

The only thing I have of value
Is my heart so warm and true
So I'll fill it up with love
And personally deliver it to you

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-18 05:47 PM


(sigh) Oh Sue, this is soooooooo beautiful, I love it!!! (smiles) May his love forever shine in your heart and fill you with happiness! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thnak you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Larry C
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2 posted 2001-12-18 07:11 PM


Sue,
Cute. I like it.

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-12-18 07:15 PM


Such a valuable and irretrievable gift.  
Such a beautiful and loving poem
Write on.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Hypnosis
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4 posted 2001-12-18 07:23 PM


Sue, what a magical poem filled with love and cleverness.  To read this to your love will definately catch their attention!  Keep up the good work!

     Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

Saunni
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5 posted 2001-12-18 07:47 PM


Suetang, you said it better than I ever could...Just beautiful!

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

Tracey
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where insanity meets breeding
6 posted 2001-12-18 11:15 PM


This is so sweet and romantic Sue. I think all you have to give is a great deal. I'm sure it's appreciated too.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Krawdad
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7 posted 2001-12-19 12:37 PM


A lovely and warm offer.  Nicely done.  Oh, and did you need an address for that delivery?  (just kidding)  
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8 posted 2001-12-19 10:45 AM


enjoyed
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