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Lover's Dance (Duet with Irish Rose)
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Lover's Dance (Duet with Irish Rose) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Come fly with me, we'll find the moon. And while the ocean plays a melody together, love, I'll be there soon and you'll be holding all of me. I will fly with you, the moon will call our names as we journ in rhapsody. I hear the words, I feel your all as I come to you with passions free. Come dance with me, we'll melt the stars and every tide that rushed before will claim the night, my love, it will be ours you had me with the whisper of my name. Your name I know, My heart does tell will keep me flying on ever faithfully I will arrive, dance with you my belle for your whisper's song does thrill me. We can't deny, this rhapsody that drifts along the sand, you hear it too it's calling you to come to me a sleeping song that lifts the midnight blue. The blue of night guides me to waiting arms as I yearn to walk the sands at your side. I hear the call, my eyes glimpse your charms for your passionate whisper does not hide. I feel this fire, this passion born unfolding into love along the shore. I know that soon, before the morn we'll taste a love we've not had before. Oh dearest love, the passions do fire the love that I carry and have for thee. I will arrive, with more than desire as we waltz love's dance passionately. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Such a lovely poem you two wrote here. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry and Kathleen! This is magnificent! You two write wonderfully together! BRAVO!! Hugs to you both, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you Titia....and I wish to also thank Kay (Irish Rose) for making this poem what it is...She writes beautifully... THANK YOU KAY...VERY MUCH.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy...Kay made it easy for me to follow behind her...She writes wonderfully... Wish you could have joined in...it would have been a beautiful write as well.. |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
this is great! [This message has been edited by Carol Luna (12-18-2001 05:39 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Carol...thank you very much...from both of us...and I am open to anyone else that would like to write a duet... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
YAY!!! CLAPPING WILDLY!!! Oh Barry and Kathleen, this is such a beautiful romantic masterpiece, I love it! (smiles) You two make such a beautiful duet, this is a timeless one to me! (sigh) I'm about ready to start writing the duet with you, dearest Magnus, and I would be delighted to write one with you too Kathleen, if you'd like to! (big hugggssssssss) We all love you both, sweet friends! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet friends, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Barry, thank you for asking me, this is the first time anyone has ever asked me to write with them. I enjoyed it so much! Thank you all for reading, Barry added just the right touches. I think I felt the ocean at my feet !!!!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
This is absolutely beautiful. You both did a wonderful job. Hope to see more from you two in the future.   |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Magnus and Irish Rose, YAY This is completely wonderful I greatly hugely muchly enjoyed Hugs to you both, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (12-18-2001 09:00 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...thanx for all the warm words... I am waiting young man....my pen is hot... but I am old and it is getting late... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Eloise...I have a feeling that we both enjoyed this enough to encore at some point.. But I have some catching up to do first... Thank You... And Kay did beautifully... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kay...thank you...much enjoyed this...Karen (Startime) loved doing it with me...I enjoyed the duet with both of you...You both are very talented ladies...We will do another duet...Thank You Lady Irish... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tara....this has been a blast the last couple of days writing a duet with two very talented ladies that I respect a great deal for their poetry....I loved this...It will happen again....and I hope soon.... |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
You have written a beautiful dance together. So romantic and dreamy. I hope you will duet again..sounds like you had a lot of fun writing it. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Tracey....thank yu much...Kay felt honored to do this with me...when in fact, it was I that has been honored by her and by Karen (Startime) in this little escapade...much enjoyed the creativity..... |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very nicely written Magnus and Kathleen! This is a wonderful collaboration you two! Much enjoyed the seamless flow between your thoughts Best wishes, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Barry and Kathleen, I felt the ebb and flow of this in my bones. Brilliantly done and seamless. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* absolutely stunning are the only words I can come up with for such an incredibly romantic poem. Barry and Kathleen, you two have matched the passions of your hearts perfectly in this wonderful poem. I absolutely love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nicely done both of you...always fun to collaborate isnt it?..enjoyed very much ~Victoria~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
great team the two of you make. wonderful collaboration. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
You guys are great, thanks for reading our duet! Kathleen (Kay) |
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